Hiya everyone,

I’m working on my Query Package atm, would anyone in the community fancy swapping first chapters for some feedback? Its a Teen Cli-FI with a Split first-person POV called ‘Stop the Clocks’. I’m looking for some feedback on the flow, structure, and pacing of a new draft.

I’m also off on mid-term break from teaching in a week so I can get back with exchanged feedback quite swiftly if anyone would like to exchange!