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      Brian McMahon Gallagher posted an update in the group Group logo of FREE: WM Community Group – Open to PublicFREE: WM Community Group – Open to Public

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      Hiya everyone,

      I’m working on my Query Package atm, would anyone in the community fancy swapping first chapters for some feedback? Its a Teen Cli-FI with a Split first-person POV called ‘Stop the Clocks’. I’m looking for some feedback on the flow, structure, and pacing of a new draft.

      I’m also off on mid-term break from teaching in a week so I can get back with exchanged feedback quite swiftly if anyone would like to exchange!

      Harriet Howe and Emma Read
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