2023 Novel-in-Development Award – RESULTS

Our shortlist this year was judged by Becky Bagnall, top literary agent.

The Lindsay Literary Agency was founded in 2008 by Becky Bagnell, who has been in publishing for over 25 years. She worked as a commissioning editor at Macmillan before becoming a literary agent in 2008. Becky’s clients have been published in over 30 languages across the world and include multi-award winning authors such as, Pamela Butchart, Sue Wallman, Sam Gayton, Josh Silver, Larry Hayes and Louise Finch.

Here’s what Becky had to say:

“I have found choosing a winner tough as the standard of entry was very high. There were some wonderful ideas in the selection and lots of strong voices. However, I’ve been looking at these again today and I think I have finally been able to come to a decision.”

Winner

The one I’d like to put forward as the winner is: The Nighthawk Detectives. From the very first sentence The Nighthawk Detectives captured my interest making me want to champion Penelope and her mission to find her father. The world building felt very strong and the narrative voice warm and inviting. All in all I would love to read more!  

Congratulations to Melanie Whitmarsh, author of The Nighthawk Detectives.

Runner-up

For the runner-up I’ve chosen Ellie Anderson Is Dead. The concept behind this YA script is completely compelling and I just loved the opening chapter. The author had total command of her characters and already an intriguing world was opening up. Again this was a script I would love to keep reading.  

Congratulations to Sophie Clarke, author of Ellie Anderson Is Dead.

Honorary Mention

As a near miss I wondered if I could also mention, The Sidewinders. This has a lot of potential and the writing in the opening chapter felt very accomplished and definitely peaked my interest.

Congratulations to Gavin Crippin, author of The Sidewinders.

Full shortlist with names

Title of ManuscriptName
Ellie Anderson is DeadSophie Clarke
KickerellaBecky Stretton
LIFECYCLESteve Blackman
Monty McPurr and the Genie of the BlobfishBecky Stretton
On FireAmy Reitz
The Curse of the Cyborg ShiftersClaire Thomas
The Ghosts of Père LachaiseFaye Holt
The Mermaid SkeletonClaire Thomas
The Moongardener’s DaughterBruna De Luca
The Nighthawk DetectivesMelanie Whitmarsh
THE SIDEWINDERSGavin Crippin

Full longlist with names

Title of ManuscriptName
Behind the green skyKayla Herbert
Brassica Galactica and the Black-eyed PeaNatasha Beloff
DREAMDOGSA E. Daly
Ellie Anderson is DeadSophie Clarke
Jack of All Georgia Garfield-White 
KickerellaBecky Stretton
LIFECYCLESteve Blackman
Little Washerwoman of WilaghmoreCarey Camburn
Living the GameGavin Tangen
LostLindsay McKrell
Monty McPurr and the Genie of the BlobfishBecky Stretton
On FireAmy Reitz
RevenantsSara Lilley
SEAJET JOClaire Dopson
Skarlet and the Impossible TomorrowsMacAllan Dale
The Curse of the Cyborg ShiftersClaire Thomas
The Ghosts of Père LachaiseFaye Holt
The girl who talks to ghosts Sarah Davis
The In-SpectresMarjorie (Marnie) Forbes Eldridge
The Mermaid SkeletonClaire Thomas
The Moongardener’s DaughterBruna De Luca
The Nighthawk DetectivesMelanie Whitmarsh
THE SIDEWINDERSGavin Crippin
Things They Don’t Tell YouAlka Handa
UNCOMMON CORARegan Nuqui
Wonder Library – The Missing Villain MysteryDonna Shah
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